Hi Heather, great job on delivering your pitch! I liked how you started off with telling the audience to imagine a scenario first. I also liked how you analyzed some options like if the person were to buy a car or take an Uber or Lyft even if either of those were not a resource for them. You spoke smoothly and explained the benefits of your opportunity very well. The only thing I would suggest is to stand up and record yourself instead of sitting down at a table or desk. Other than that, job well done!
Hi Heather! I think you did a good job on your elevator pitch and your idea is well thought out. You look professional and put together although I would have liked you to be standing up. Overall it looks like it was well thought out. I liked how you changed your voice. Good luck on your opportunity, I think it could be great
Hi Heather, great job on delivering your pitch! I liked how you started off with telling the audience to imagine a scenario first. I also liked how you analyzed some options like if the person were to buy a car or take an Uber or Lyft even if either of those were not a resource for them. You spoke smoothly and explained the benefits of your opportunity very well. The only thing I would suggest is to stand up and record yourself instead of sitting down at a table or desk. Other than that, job well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Heather! I think you did a good job on your elevator pitch and your idea is well thought out. You look professional and put together although I would have liked you to be standing up. Overall it looks like it was well thought out. I liked how you changed your voice. Good luck on your opportunity, I think it could be great
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